Rewrite: Deserving Punishment

Deserving Punishment (Rewritten)

(Girl into dog)

Mia was your average stuck up girl. Her body was that of any boys wet dream. Her shoulder length dusty blonde hair, hourglass figure, and stunning green eyes only hid her bitchy nature. Mia was smiling as she walked down the hall towards her dorm room, carrying a small gift wrapped present in her arms. As she fumbled with the key to her dorm room, her mind was replaying what had just happened a few minutes ago. She had told off her Ex ,Phil, so many time it was unreal. Finaly she had gotten mad enough at him to humiliate him during class by revealing how small of a cock he had.
"I still can't beleive he apologized to me." Mia though triumphantly as the door to her private dorm room swung open lazily. Mia pulled off her windbreaker and tossed it on her bed, leaving her in a pair of tight cotton shorts and a very transparent white tank top. "Let's see what Phil got me." She thought as she slowly unwrapped the small package. Mia felt the slightest pang of guilt when she saw what was inside the small box. Resting of a soft black backing was a stunning silver necklace with a small gold pendant that had the word "Mia" inscribed on the shimmering surface. Whatever remorse she had felt momentarily was long gone as Mia stepped in front of the mirror, necklace in hand. "I might just give Phil a visit tommorow just to see if I can milk anything else out of him." She laughed mentaly as she latched the necklace around her slender neck. The second the necklace latched shut a warm surge spread through the necklace. "What the hell?" Mia gasped as her necklace seemed to morph and change before her eyes. The slim strand of silver grew thick and turned a bright pink in color. Mia stood speechless at what her necklace had become. Nothing more than a cheap pink dog collar. "That bastard!" She shouted angrily as she tried to unlatch the collar. Mia realised somthing was wrong, her fingers weren't moving like they were supposed to. She brought her hands up to her face and screamed. Right before her eyes her hands were shifting, growing stumpy as paw pads appeared on her palms. Her nails curled and elongated, becoming blunt claws. "This can't be happening!" Mia though in a panic. But her fear was short lived. A sudden cramp in her stomach forced her to her knees. She moaned slightly as her arms passed over surprisingly sensitive bumps that pressed against her tank top. Trying her best to ignore the slight pain in her belly, Mia lifted up her shirt with her paws only to scream once again. On her belly were six pinkl bumps that could only be nipples. "I'm turning into a dog!" Mia gasped as the realization finaly set in. Mia tried to stand, but fell to the ground. She whimpered slightly as she noticed that her feet were now paws. Another wave of pain washed over her body. Her generous chest pulled back, leaving only nipples behind. Her hips clicked and snapped as her legs reformed into a more fitting shape, locking her on all fours. A tail sprouted above her ass, pushing her shorts and panties down. She moaned as the cool air hit her now burning nether lips. Mia whimpered and barked as her face pressed outwards, becoming a muzzle. As her hair shrank back into her head, joining perfectly with the sandly blond fur that now covered her body, one last human thought ran through her head. "I don't deserve this."

Phil strolled happily into Mia's room, carrying a hot pink leash. He smiled as a very happy looking bitch ran up and licked his hand, her tail wagging rapidly. "Come on Mia, my dog Rex is looking forward to meeting you." He smiled as he clipped the leash onto her collar. The dog simply looked up at her master and followed him as he left the room, eager to be a good bitch for her soon to be mate.